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I wish there would be someone who would stand beneath my window and sing me down to earth with songs about rain, the world, and new begginings.

I wish there would be someone who'd toss pebbles at my window and then I'd jump out and escape for a late night joy ride down the highway.

But there's no one
but there's no one to call me back again
no one to call me down to earth with soft pink lips that I would dream about in bliss

Am I forgotten?

I wish there would be someone who would understand my need for the colors of the autumn leaves and the sound of the waves upon the sand

I wish there would be someone who would take me out to dance all night long like some techno party rave geek

But there's no one
but there's no one to take me out to dance
and there's no one to touch my face, my lips, my hair, my hands
and to whipser lovers names

Am I forgotten?

I want to find myself a lover who will cherish me forever and a year

But I'm forgotten
always over looked
too loud
too soft
too much of an unknown

So I'll stay forgotten
I'll stay uncharted territory
and I'll grow older
and I'll stay lonely for good

And I'll stay lonely for good

Yes I'll stay lonely for good
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Just a short song I wrote. Still needs some work. Based off of my real life feelings about something I need to get off my chest.

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:iconhidingrazi:
Aww D: This is really sad, but really good, you captured the emotion really well!

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The Anonymous circle of pencil jugglers
:iconallroseshavethorns:
thanks! and sorry it took me so long to reply. Busy since school started D:

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Toast is my favorite color

If life doesn't give you any sugar and water then your lemonade's gonna suck
:iconhidingrazi:
Your welcome, heh - Im in th same situation xD

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The Anonymous circle of pencil jugglers

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